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❶ 摘錄/匯總《救貓咪——電影編劇指南》1——一句話故事

寫劇本動筆前先寫「一句話故事」(logline),或一句話簡介( one-line)。

優秀的一句話故事都有共同點,除了回答「它講的是什麼」這個問題,還都包含了4個成功的要素:

一、優秀的一句話故事必須具備的首要因素:反諷,或稱鉤子(the hook),它的作用就是勾起你的興趣。(情感上要吸引人)

(註:「反諷」這個翻譯不太好,可能是反差,轉折,意料之外這類的意思。)

例1:一個警察來洛杉磯探望與他兩地分居的老婆,結果老婆上班的辦公大樓被恐怖分子佔領了。——《虎膽龍威》(Die Hard)

例2:一個商人愛上了他雇來假扮他女朋友的妓女。——《漂亮女人》(Pretty Woman)

二、優秀的一句話故事必備的第二重要的要素是:能讓你從中看到整部電影。(美妙的腦補畫面)

例1:「她是個完美的凳顫女人,只要別喝醉。」——《盲目的約會》(Blind Date)

例2:「一個謹小慎微的教師准備跟他深愛的女孩結婚,但偏偏未來的大舅子是個保護欲過剩的警察,要求他必須先跟一趟地獄之旅。——《佐州自救兄弟》(Ride Along)

為什麼「離水之魚」(fish-out-of -water)的故事這么流行:一個特定類型的人物,被推進了一個完全超出他理解能力的世界裡,你能看到這樣一個故事所具有的潛力。如《佐州自救兄弟》:一個天真而膽小的教師被丟進了他的警察大舅子每天面對的犯罪世界裡。

如果你寫不出合格的一句話故事,也許應該重新審視你的整部電影。

三、優秀的一句話故事要能體現出這部電影是給誰看的,以及拍出來要花多少錢。(吸引電影公司的買家)

例1:「一對新婚夫婦要在聖誕節這天跑遍雙方父母的四個再婚家庭。」——《四個聖誕節》(Four Christmases),屬四象限電影,能吸引到最大范圍的潛在觀眾。

例2:「一個新入職的員工去參加公司的周末集體度假,結果發現有個人想殺他。」——《度假》(The Retreat)

美國電影工業體系將電影觀眾劃分為四個象限:

第一象限:25歲以下男性。第二象限:25歲以下女性。

第三象限:25歲以上男性。第四象限:25歲以上女悄粗輪性。

四象限電影即受眾覆蓋全部四個象限的影片,相當於「合家歡電影」。

四、最後,優秀的一句話故事必須配上合適的片名,這樣才會產生絕妙的效果。

優秀的片名必須既有反諷,還要能濃縮影片的故事 。如:《律政俏佳人》(Legally Blonde)。要想出一個既能准確表述,又不會過於直白(on the nose)而顯得愚蠢的片名,本身就是一門藝術。 反面例子:《為愛還是為錢》(For Love or Money)

優秀的片名要具體的一個關鍵要素,是要能作為整 個故事 的大標題。它說清了片子講的是什麼。

綜合片名和一句話故事所有要求:反諷、期待感、目標觀眾和拍攝成本啟信,而且清楚地說明了講的是什麼。

❷ 一部英語電影的英文介紹和經典台詞

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1)介紹:

After winning a trip on the RMS Titanic ring a dockside card game, American Jack Dawson spots the society girl Rose DeWitt Bukater who is on her way to Philadelphia to marry her rich snob fiance Cal Hockley. Rose feels helplessly trapped by her situation and makes her way to the aft deck and thinks of suicide until she is rescued by Jack. Cal is therefore obliged to invite Jack to dine at their first-class table where he suffers through the slights of his snobbish hosts. In return, he spirits Rose off to third class for an evening of dancing, giving her the time of her life. Deciding to forsake her intended future all together, Rose asks Jack, who has made his living making sketches on the streets of Paris, to draw her in the nude wearing the invaluable blue diamond Cal has given her. Cal finds out and has Jack locked away. Soon afterwards, the ship hits an iceberg and Rose must find Jack while both must run from Cal even as the ship sinks deeper into the freezing water.

Proction Status: Released

Logline: A young man and woman from different social classes fall in love aboard the ill-fated voyage.

Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama and Romance

Running Time: 3 hrs. 17 min.

Release Date: December 19, 1997

MPAA Rating: PG-13 for disaster related peril and violence, nudity, sensuality and brief language.

Distributors: Paramount Pictures

Proction Co.: Lightstorm Entertainment

Studios: 20th Century Fox, Paramount Pictures

U.S. Box Office: $600,743,440

Filming Locations: Rosarito, Mexico
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada
Los Angeles, California, USA
United Kingdom

Proced in: United States

2)經典對白
Rose: Jack, this is impossible. I can't see you.

Rose: Jack,這不可能,我看不到你。

Jack: Rose, you're no picnic... you're a spoiled brat even, but under that you're a strong, pure heart, and you're the most amazing astounding girl I've ever known and…

Jack: Rose,你並不是在野餐。好了,被寵壞的孩子,但是你有堅強而純潔的心靈,你是我見過的最令人吃驚的女孩……

Rose: Jack I…

Rose: Jack,我……

Jack: No wait. Let me try to get this out. You're amazing... and I know I have nothing to offer you, Rose. I know that. But I'm involved now. You jump, I jump, remember? I can't turn away without knowing you're going to be alright.

Jack: 等等。讓我把話說完。你是那麼吸引我……我知道我並沒有什麼可以給你,Rose,我知道。但是我應經愛上你了。你跳,我就跳,記得嗎?我不能就這樣離開,不知道你是否平安。

Rose: You're making this very hard. I'll be fine. Really.

Rose: 你把事情弄得復雜了。我會好起來的。真的。

Jack: I don't think so. They've got you in a glass jar like some butterfly, and you're going to die it you don't break out. Maybe not right away, cause you're strong. But sooner or later the fire in you is going to go out.

Jack: 我不這么想。你像被他們放在玻璃罐中的蝴蝶一樣,你會力竭而亡。也許不是馬上, 因為你很堅強。但是這是早晚的事。

Rose: It's not up to you to save me, Jack.

Rose: 我不能靠你來救我,Jack。

Jack: You're right. Only you can do that.

Jack: 對。只有你自己能救自己。

Rose: I have to go back, they'll miss me. Please, Jack, for both our sakes, leave me alone.

Rose: 我得回去了,他們會掛念我的。Jack,請讓我單獨待著,這樣對我們都好

3)經典台詞:
1.Outwardly, I was everything a well-brought up girl should be. Inside, I was screaming.
外表看,我是個教養良好的小姐,骨子裡,我很反叛。
2.We』re the luckiest sons-of-*es in the world.
我們是真*走運極了。(地道的美國國罵)
3.There is nothing I couldn』t give you, there is nothing I would deny you, if you would not deny me. Open you』re heart to me.
如果你不違背我,你要什麼我就能給你什麼,你要什麼都可以。把你的心交給我吧。
4.What the purpose of university is to find a suitable husband.
讀大學的目的是找一個好丈夫。(好像有些片面,但比較真實)

5.Remember, they love money, so just pretend like you own a goldmine and you』re in the club.
只要你裝得很有錢的樣子他們就會跟你套近乎。
6.All life is a game of luck.
生活本來就全靠運氣。
7.I love waking up in the morning and not knowing what』s going to happen, or who I』m going to meet, where I』m going to wind up.
我喜歡早上起來時一切都是未知的,不知會遇見什麼人,會有什麼樣的結局。
8.I figure life is a gift and I don』t intend on wasting it. You never know what hand you』re going to get dealt next. You learn to take life as it comes at you.
我覺得生命是一份禮物,我不想浪費它,你不會知道下一手牌會是什麼,要學會接受生活。
9.To make each day count.
要讓每一天都有所值。(※I like this one )
10.We』re women. Our choices are never easy.
我們是女人,我們的選擇從來就不易。
11.You jump, I jump. (another touching sentence)
12.Will you give us a chance to live?
能不能給我們留一條生路?

13.God shall wipe away all the tears from their eyes, and there shall be no more death. Neither shall there be sorrow or dying, neither shall there be any more pain, for the former world has passed away.
上帝擦去他們所有的眼淚。死亡不再有,也不再有悲傷和生死離別,不再有痛苦,因往事已矣。
14.You』re going to get out of here. You』re going to go on and you』re going to make lots of babies and you』re going to watch them grow and you』re going to die an old, an old lady, warm in your bed. Not here. Not this night. Not like this.
你一定會脫險的,你要活下去,生很多孩子,看著他們長大。你會安享晚年,安息在溫暖的床上,而不是今晚在這。